its not bad...
but its not spectacular. the beat is drowned out by the main synth. Most of your synths I can actually almost name from a vst. I think I heard nexus. The melody is pretty repetitive (my opinion, to each his own). from 0:50-1:17 that synth is....not well placed (again my opinion). The build up snare that you have is louder than the beat you have it going into and doesnt transition well. try a crash after the build up snares. Giving my 2 cents here, not meaning to rub off as a douche lol.
POTENTIAL! I SEE IT!
Happy Producing
-Pillow